Beta Readers vs Critiquers

Over the course of four years, I’ve subjected my soon-to-be-completed novel to over 200 critiques of various chapters. I’m not sure if that’s brilliant or insane of me, but I know I’m not alone. Like many other writers, I’m in multiple critique groups. One is composed of 20-30 published writers, led by a more established writer, who listen to a chapter being read out loud, critique it together, then provide individual mark-ups. In another, when it’s led by my favorite writing teacher, at least 60 writers are in the room with the chance to weigh in. In my smallest and most demanding group, my entire book was critiqued by two Pushcart nominees and a writer/editor/publisher. But with this particular novel, I’d never allowed myself the thrill of real readers, until now.

Reader3Last week, I had my book read by a Chicago-area book club that has been meeting almost once a month for over 25 years. They read all different kinds of books and are excellent readers, but they’re not writers, editors, teachers or script doctors. In this instance, they acted as beta readers. I’d also call them real readers.

Real readers are the kind who let go, who are in for the ride. They leave you excited messages about how much they loved your book. They get all worked up about your characters, sometimes worried about them, sometimes upset, asking you questions like how could she do that? Your characters seem as real to them as they do in your head.

This is the why we write, isn’t it? To have the characters we imagine take on life in other people’s minds. We want readers to care about them, to be affected by them, to find themselves pondering their problems. To be transported, to be entertained. To laugh or shiver or cry.

Readers are the prize, and for the most part you want to save them for the final product. When your work is in process, you should seek out the best critiques you can possibly find. But when you think your book is ready, before you start submitting to agents and editors, and the often discouraging realities of the marketplace, don’t deny yourself the thrill of a few real readers.

They give a writer hope.



Resisting Your Own Autosuggest

iphonesWe’ve all been there – when we’re running late or feeling lazy or trying to dash off an email during a stoplight – those moments when we’re grateful that our phones seem to anticipate what we want to say. “That sounds good.” “I’ll call you later.” The words pop up on the screen before I even think them. Predictability eases me down the well-worn path. See, it just happened again.

Good fiction writing requires us to resist the predictable, both the sort that everyone overuses – common cliques, trite metaphors, tired character tropes – and our own personal collection. All of us have favorite gestures, facial expressions, descriptions, and snatches of dialogue. In your first drafts, I wouldn’t worry about them. In mine, the characters start out shaking their heads like a contagious tic. But when you edit, make an effort to resist your own mental autosuggest. Here are a few good reasons why (besides not wanting to drive your readers nuts):

To keep readers from tuning out. No one feels a need to bother picturing people who are doing typical things. In a chapter of mine critiqued by the talented Rebecca Makkai, author of The Hundred-Year House and The Borrower, my characters were eating and sipping drinks at a Christmas party. She suggested that I give them more unusual food – for example, they could be cracking nuts with old nutcrackers – or unexpected small actions such as making a paper airplane out of an old takeout menu. The same goes for what they say and how they look. In other words, work to make your characters’ behavior different and interesting enough to catch and hold your readers’ attention.

To make everything count. Gestures, expressions and descriptions can all convey meaning. They can be an opportunity to add layers or increase the stakes. Readers notice when a gap opens up between what characters say and what they do. Everyone loves to watch for clues. Thinking of the extra messages that you’d like to send can help you to avoid the repetitive and potentially boring.

To convince yourself of the reality of the scene. Your first and most important reader is you. If you make your characters less predictable, then all of sudden you’ll find yourself needing to pay them more attention. Each time you add another distinctive action or expression to a character, she or he will become more singular and real. Characters will get more specific, gestures more laden, and descriptions more riveting. Your scenes as a whole will take on more texture and complication.

So when you’re ready to revise, try to push yourself past what’s easy and automatic. Try surprising yourself.



The Writer’s Truth Writing Workshop at OCWW

I’m very excited to be speaking at Off Campus Writer’s Workshop this month. The topic is important to me as a writer. Our own truth underlies our work even if we don’t always realize it. Awareness of it can help us crack open our characters and increase the tension and complications in our plots. We can also use it to move from one to the other: to find the best plot for a intriguing character or the best character for a clever plot. Perhaps best of all, it can give us the key to talking about our book to others in a meaningful way. I’m especially happy to be presenting this topic at OCWW, the oldest continuously running writer’s workshop in the country. I served on the OCWW Board for 15 years. The details are excerpted below, or you can visit the OCWW website.

The Writer’s Truth: Connecting Character, Plot and Thematic Values

Thursday, March 26, 2015, from 9:30 to Noon

Winnetka Community House, 620 Lincoln, Winnetka (North of Chicago)

Members: $10; nonmembers: $15. All are welcome.

The Writer’s Truth is something that you as a writer believe in your heart to be true. What, at the deepest level, you’re trying to say with your work: your thematic values, not merely “theme.” Awareness of your truth can lead you to the characters and plot that will most profoundly express it. If you begin with character, but have trouble with plot, this will help you to discover the challenges your characters need to face. If you begin with plot, this will help you to create characters in resistance to your truth: characters who need to be tested and either fail or grow. You can use this awareness to begin a new book, intensify a book in progress, or break down stumbling blocks along the way. And at the end, you’ll be able to articulate to others why your book really matters, with a pitch that carries the ring of personal truth.

Ellen is a fiction writer and poet whose work has been published in literary journals and anthologies. She is currently at work on a novel, The Ex-Mom, which made the Finalist Short List in the Faulkner Writing Competition as a novel-in-progress. As a Board member of OCWW for 15 years, she helped to bring programs to hundreds of writers in the Chicago area. Visit Ellen’s new website at EllenTMcKnight.com and follow her on Twitter @EllenTMcKnight.

Members of OCWW may submit manuscripts in advance for critique by March 19. Please visit the OCWW manuscript submission guidelines for more information, including an email address for submissions.